"The International School of Kuala Lumpur provides an exceptional education that challenges each student to develop the attitudes, skills, knowledge and understanding to become a highly successful, spirited, (silence) socially responsible global citizen."
I think that adding silence before " social responsible global citizen" creates void because it says 'highly successful, spirited' before the silence and it creates a question in the listeners mind. Highly successful, spirited what?????. I think the tension it creates is unexpected because there is just a long paragraph and then suddenly there is a pause and creates tension.
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